Love it! Especially the music! :D
I got bored going into it and ended up skipping till the part in work. It just didn't interest me even though visual novels and games like them usually interest me because of their focus on good storytelling. But I wasn't engaged and because of that I stopped playing. The story was bad, artwork, I don't really know what to list about it that was really that good. But the fact you made this shows you can make a game. You just need to expand and develop your skills so you can improve on your next project :D
But I honestly believe this is a troll, so this constructive criticism doesn't really matter :D Congrats on making it to the front page :D
Why bother leaving a review when it's just a waste of your time. Moments you could have spent with the people you cherish.
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